10 years after graduating:
Ruthie
After a couple of years, we all met again on the reunion party. It was very nice to see them all again and I was so excited. The first person I met was Andrea. As I could see she was pregnant again. We put our arms around each other, sitting down on the chairs to have a talk. Andrea smiled and asked me a lot of things what I expected her to do.
"What are you doing?"
I laught " I guess it is too much to tell you in just one night."
I saw that Andrea was excited so she began to talk about herself.
"Ruthie, look at me, do you really think that I'm going to move? I am pregnant, I can't move, so tell me everything. Where is your husband? Did you leave him at home?"
I grinned and said "AJ is still at home because he has to care about our children but then he will be here."
Andrea's eyes widened. "Well we both got lovely ones, you know Christian is my husband, I think he is getting a drink. So tell me what happend to your life."
I nodded. "After finishing my studies in Stanford, I grounded a lawyer's office with some friends of mine. Besides I grounded a helporganisation for black-skinned students." A lot of thoughts came to my mind...it sounds like the good old Ruthie, doesn't? But at the moment it is very important to push my career forward.
Then I heard Andrea saying "Ruthie, what's going on?"
I incoherent began to talk " AJ broke up with his career as a footballstar. He understands my wishes so he stays at home to take care of our children. Sorely he has no other opportunity."
Andrea got shocked, I can see that. But I am used to see this reaction, it's on every face I look into, when I tell this story.
I heard Andrea's voice again she sounded breathless.
"Why? What happened to him? It was his passion!"
I tried to explain it to my friend. "Well, he was injured when he played on one of his most important positions in game. He was near to a laming.
Andrea's voice sounded sad "Oh my god, what for bad news. What is he doing now?"
I added "He does well, no consequences, but since this day, he is only interested in our family. He wants to care about us as long as he is able to."
Andrea nodded and looked for Christian. He was at the bar to get a drink.
Suddenly she graps ma arm. "Look", she said.
My head flips around.
A shiver rund through my veins. I knew which person I had to look at. Erika. She stood at the entry, beautiful as always. What would she do? How would she react? Although we had no fight as our lives seperated, I didn't know how to behave. In addition to this I was wondering because there seemed to be her new boyfriend and probably her son.
Andrea turned to me "Ruthie, do you see them? It's Erika and her litte family. I heard she'd worked as a secretary in New York with Kelly. Then both found a new boyfriend and married."
I was surprised because of this news so I didn't know what to say.
Andrea looked at me. "Ruthie, you are staring in space..."
I nodded and answered "Well, I think it's good for Erika, maybe she doesn't think of AJ anymore."
Andrea stood up and told me " That might be right. Besides she got the chance to become a famous singer. I think someone said something about a musical,...but that's not so important."
I nodded again and stood up and observed the entry. Then I saw that Erika came over. Her black dress was good-looking when she moved and everybody could see that it had been expensive.
"Hello Ruthie. Hello Andrea." Erika was standing in front of us and Andrea looked at me in surprise.
I didn't like the silence so I began to talk "Hey Erika, how do you do?"
"Oh everything does well. I'm living in New York City with my family, ya' know? What's about you? How does AJ?"
My stomack got sick.
"Oh, ehm...you know that we are married?"
"Of course, I read it in the news. The famous footballplayer and his intelligent youth-love. How could I overread THAT headline? Congratulations."
I was confused. Was it ironic or did she become a better person? I had to notice that it had been a wrong guess. But I gave her a chance.
"Thanks. I also heard of you. You are famous as a musicalstar, aren't you?"
"Oh, I'm not a star but I can survive with the money I earn."
"I think that you do a great job. You always sang like an angel. I thought this from the first moment. I heard you in church, as..."
"STOP. Don't act like we are friends."
I was shocked, I didn't expected her to say something like that. I was speachless, so I didn't say anything. How could I be so stupid? It was clear that she still hates me. I looked at the floor. Erika still got the power to get me down.
I was about to say something, when I saw AJ. I took my hands on my face. What a situation, I had to find myself again. Calm down Ruthie.
I felt arms around me. AJ came over to lay his arms around me, helding me close.
"Hey Darling!"
He looked into my eyes, took a deep breath and turned to Erika.
"Good evening. How areyou?"
I could see how Erika fighted for her mask to keep it standing.
"Good." was the only thing she said and it sounded cold. She shouted self-conscious over the music "Wish you a nice evening, maybe we'll see us later."
She was near to a run out of th room. She hurried to get out of our nearness.
Then AJ took me by the arm and kissed me. He told me that the kids are right and then we talked with every person we met, especially with Christian and Andrea. But I didn't see Erika anymore. So it was a great party and I think there would be some more like this one.
6 Kommentare:
I find yor chapter nice. It is romantic that AJ is Ruthie's husband and that Christian and Andrea are married.
It's realistic that Ruthie works as a lawyer and in a help organisation.
The part about AJ's broken career is interesting. During reading I feel sorry for him but I find it godd, that his family is very important for him.
I doesn't like that Erika hates Ruthie. I believe that she became a better person and changed her character. But your way is interesting too.
Thank you ;)
I liked the chapter. Your language is very good and the way you writes the story is fluent and you are able to follow the story. Also you are interested in what would happened next!
I liked the part with AJ's accident! The story is realistic. But I didn't liked the changing of Erika and Ruthie, because I did'nt believe they would behave in this way after 10 years, although it was exciting to read.
An nice look in the future!! I thought all stories would show a dark future for all the characters, like the story of Larissas group and the group of mine does. But your story, tells an happy life for everybody, also if AJ was injured and Erika is angry about Ruthie for ever!! So it´s an realistic Happy End!!
Very nice to read, a good changing!! Easy to understand!!
Thanks^^
I think your chapter is very good.The language it's like in the book,it's the way Ruthie talks.But I guess Erika and Ruthie are able to talk in a normal way with each other,in your chapter it's a little bit babyish.I also don't understand the clause "Erika still got the power to get me down",because Ruthie got the power to got Erika down,didn't she?
But all in all,I like your chapter, you had great ideas!!!
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